Colors of May --- xdjdmc
Colors of May
Strange taste
Cooked by a flame
But only half baked
Roses fade
When sky’s green
Away it takes
A wordless dream
Willows dance
Unfurled fans
Brook springs
Lilac mint
In the late-spring's aroma
Drunk in a shallow coma
Collect the naked
That is still remained
Gather the segments
That will be permanent
Melt them warm
When a sigh drops
Mix the bottle up-down
While being in-poured
Sign on the lid
Seal with kisses
Throw the bottle into sea
Of the heart bottom deep
Lest it'll be opened again
A titan may out stand
Kneels tremble 'nd
Kneels bend!
---xdjdmc (2007-5-3)
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Note: (1) what i like this poem is its image, rhythm, intense feeling, penetration of words. “Colors of May” is a good combination of word, image, and feeling. (2) more will be for other people’s writing later.
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