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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-01 02:14:40, 来源:未名交友
标题: An April Day --- xdjdmc

An April Day --- xdjdmc

Night fades
Dawn wakes
Here comes a morn
Of an April day

Sun does rise
Tears’ve been wiped
From tips of the leaves
Who stopped cry

Open the window
Clean up the mold
Go to the meadow
Rid off the cold 

Breeze’s breath
Is the fresh air
Heart says -
I’ll come near

Birds fly
Up so high
Clouds hide
Behind the kite

Blossom kissy
Bees busy
Girls pretty
Boys naughty
Daddies kiddy
Mummies naggy

Real doers ants
Creating their tents
Butterfly can’t stand
Idling as they want

There on the path
Chirping little bird Max
Slim legs ask
“Like to dance a Waltz?”

Piggies, ducklings, hens
Together join the band—
“Give me your hands
Let’s be good friends”

Rose turns blush
Thrones get so harsh
“Not wanna get a thrust?
Then don’t try a push.”

A big yawn the sprig’s made
Blows her brother a shake
“Wake, wake, wake
Don’t let the spring be late!”

Everything thrives
To be a life
Everyone smiles—
Winter dies


Come and enjoy
This wonderful time
Be in the sunshine
Which is so fine

The day tires away
Sun’s on his home way
Bye-bye he waves—
Till next day

Sleep, sleep, my sweet
Tomorrow is new to be 

---xdjdmc (2003)

http://xdjdmc.blog.jiaoyou8.com/friends_diary/xdjdmc/0_0_0/view_01458137_no_0_0.html
http://www.jiaoyou8.com/friends_board?action=announcement&board_type=club&board_id=269745&article_id=1155046&type=1   

Note: (1) this is another good one of ample images, good rhythm, excellent word penetration. reading it is very enjoyable. (2) more will be for other people’s writing later.



※ 最后修改者:unavail, 修改于:2007-07-01 10:14:15 ※
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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-01 09:36:56, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: An April Day --- xdjdmc

Thank you. My honor and pleasure.:)



※ 最后修改者:xdjdmc, 修改于:2007-07-01 09:37:15 ※
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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-01 09:39:28, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: An April Day --- xdjdmc

Thank you. and this is also one of what I think best.April day, a good day. :)



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-01 10:14:15, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: An April Day --- xdjdmc

you are very welcome. this is sth i find it beautiful for share. have a good one.

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: 日期:2007-07-01 09:39:28, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: An April Day --- xdjdmc
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Thank you. and this is also one of what I think best.April day, a good day. :)



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