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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:00:28, 来源:未名交友
标题: [original] 我的家乡

我的家乡 *

在我的籍贯栏

写着蜜桔之乡

你肯定流露艳羡

你又肯定会问:

为何不说你家乡的话?

因为我从未踏上老家半步

她已经淹没于水库 

在我的民族栏

一直都是:汉

而父亲曾提起

祖先的迁徙

从更南的地方

一个少数民族的部落

可我们的姓氏

却是源于中国的中部 

那是多么让人着迷

去追寻祖先的足迹

那是多么让人惊讶

找到了迁徙的路线

但现在,我只能这样漂着 

你吃着蜜桔

别忘了我这位异乡的客

我读着你的祝福

风带給我家乡的问候

因为蜜桔是

吉利的果子,甜蜜的祝福

---

* 背景见原创歌词:home sickness 的介绍



※ 最后修改者:xdjdmc, 修改于:2007-07-08 21:48:13 ※
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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:05:57, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

will it be south Fujian, i suppose.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:00:28, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:[original] 我的家乡
:
:

我的家乡 *

在我的籍贯栏

写着蜜桔之乡

你肯定流露艳羡

你又肯定会问:

为何不说你家乡的话?

因为我从未踏上老家半步

她已经淹没于水库 

在我的民族栏

一直都是:汉

而父亲曾提起

祖先的迁徙

从更南的地方

一个少数民族的部落

可我们的姓氏

却是源于中国的中部 

那是多么让人着迷

去追寻祖先的足迹

那是多么让人惊讶

找到了迁徙的路线

但现在,我只能这样漂着 

你吃着蜜桔

别忘了我这位异乡的客

我读着你的祝福

风带給我家乡的问候

因为蜜桔是

吉利的果子,甜蜜的祝福

---

* 背景见原创歌词:home sickness 的介绍



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:10:51, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

i think you have the passion and a lot of good stuffs to present. if you may be more selective with verse styles and rythem in presenting 我的家乡, home sick, etc, they might turn out to be good ones.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:05:57, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
: will it be south Fujian, i suppose.



※ 最后修改者:unavail, 修改于:2007-07-07 10:26:36 ※
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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:31:06, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

yes, i was less selective.when i achieved sth, i just can't wait to paste it there. thank you for the kind reminder.i will polish them more before I paste them.:)

Fujian is your hometown, isn't it? i remember. Mine(dad's hometown) is in Zhejiang,it's a regret i never ever been the small villege dad ever lived in

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:10:51, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
: i think you have the passion and a lot of stuffs to present. if you may be more selective with verse styles and rythem in presenting 我的家乡, home sick, etc, they might turn out to be good ones.



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:42:08, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

don't worry. it is good to write it down now and to work on the style and rythem later on. and it is like a mind storm and it will be quickly and easily forgotten and it won't come back again. also, having something jogged down will make it easier to refine. Fujian is famous for orange, esp. for some small cities near amoy, and i am now in a place which is more famous for orange, and it is called orange county neighboring los angeles county and san diego county. thanks.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:31:06, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
:

yes, i was less selective.when i achieved sth, i just can't wait to paste it there. thank you for the kind reminder.i will polish them more before I paste them.:)

Fujian is your hometown, isn't it? i remember. Mine(dad's hometown) is in Zhejiang,it's a regret i never ever been the small villege dad ever lived in



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:45:24, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡


don't worry. just feel free to post it here and hopefully a lot of people may help you in here.
【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:42:08, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
: don't worry. it is good to write it down now and to work on the style and rythem later on. and it is like a mind storm and it will be quickly and easily forgotten and it won't come back again. also, having something jogged down will make it easier to refine. Fujian is famous for orange, esp. for some small cities near amoy, and i am now in a place which is more famous for orange, and it is called orange county neighboring los angeles county and san diego county. thanks.



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-07 20:54:53, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

btw: orange county is the richest county in us while california is the richest state in us equaling the 7th richest country (gop) in the world, as i am told. this is less important to people living in here, comparing with its excellent weather (not cold, not hot, not too much rain, not too much wind, no snow, days always bright and long even in winter time...), variety of foods, job opportunities, seashore, mountains, lots of shopping malls, etc... and there is a small farm of orange orchard nearby always full of oranges on the tress all the year round ($2 for a bag of 3-5 lb. fresh picked oranges, etc in cash) including those orange trees in the neighboring houses, which makes me believe it orange county.... thanks.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:42:08, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
: don't worry. it is good to write it down now and to work on the style and rythem later on. and it is like a mind storm and it will be quickly and easily forgotten and it won't come back again. also, having something jogged down will make it easier to refine. Fujian is famous for orange, esp. for some small cities near amoy, and i am now in a place which is more famous for orange, and it is called orange county neighboring los angeles county and san diego county. thanks.



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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 10:01:44, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

thank you for the introduction. btw, my origin (my dad's hometown) has a nice name huangyan-yellow rock. have a nice new week. :)

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-07 20:54:53, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
:

btw: orange county is the richest county in us while california is the richest state in us equaling the 7th richest country (gop) in the world, as i am told. this is less important to people living in here, comparing with its excellent weather (not cold, not hot, not too much rain, not too much wind, no snow, days always bright and long even in winter time...), variety of foods, job opportunities, seashore, mountains, lots of shopping malls, etc... and there is a small farm of orange orchard nearby always full of oranges on the tress all the year round ($2 for a bag of 3-5 lb. fresh picked oranges, etc in cash) including those orange trees in the neighboring houses, which makes me believe it orange county.... thanks.



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 10:24:22, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

you are very welcome, and it must be a beautiful place. thanks.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-08 10:01:44, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
: thank you for the introduction. btw, my origin (my dad's hometown) has a nice name huangyan-yellow rock. have a nice new week. :)



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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 21:48:13, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original] 我的家乡

thank you, too

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-08 10:24:22, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original] 我的家乡
:
: you are very welcome, and it must be a beautiful place. thanks.



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