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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 10:06:52, 来源:未名交友
标题: more about on verse or writing

i highly agree with what you have posted, and more about it maybe:

  • get close contact to nature may help you get inspiration;
  • if you want to touch the readers, touch yourself first


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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 10:23:22, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: more about on verse or writing

yes. try to put it together by yourself as how you complete "colors of may", "an april day", etc. those are really good ones that i can always believe. thanks.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-08 10:06:52, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:more about on verse or writing
:
:

i highly agree with what you have posted, and more about it maybe:

  • get close contact to nature may help you get inspiration;
  • if you want to touch the readers, touch yourself first


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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 21:55:08, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: more about on verse or writing

i think that would be "get touched naturally", the very experience i had before i wrote June's Bay. and now i have some feelings to go on sth related to month. next will be july, but not yet figured it out, coz not yet "got touched" , so i prefer let it wait.. :)

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-08 10:23:22, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: more about on verse or writing
:
: yes. try to put it together by yourself as how you complete "colors of may", "an april day", etc. those are really good ones that i can always believe. thanks.



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 22:25:55, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: more about on verse or writing

this is good and enjoy.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-08 21:55:08, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: more about on verse or writing
:
: i think that would be "get touched naturally", the very experience i had before i wrote June's Bay. and now i have some feelings to go on sth related to month. next will be july, but not yet figured it out, coz not yet "got touched" , so i prefer let it wait.. :)



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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 22:48:39, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: more about on verse or writing

and ps, a little more again,

  • if you want the readers to enjoy reading your writngs one time, you need first enjoy reading yours ten times without boring, as unvail has mentioned;
  • write to enjoy yourself. when you find writing is tedious or can hardly know what to write or how to write, stop for a while.do not write to write(为写而写).writing should be a relaxing and funny thing, or a way freeing you of passion(were it not relieved, passion can make you uncomfortable);
  • catch the sparkle of inspirations, which flys fast. you shound remember it immediately rather let it slip away. sometime it's slight as a breeze; if stronger, like a electric flow through your body; the strongest, can make you cry;
  • snacks are as good as formal meal. when inspirations are strong (it may be called "passion",right?), just record it, it is a big meal. but when slight, record it and see if it can be extended, or just let it be. it may be nice snack. we need some nice snacks between meals, do we? This is why some masters sometimes write small works;
  • continued by other potential writers... thanks :)

    【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
    : 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
    : 日期:2007-07-08 21:55:08, 来源:未名交友
    : 标题:Re: more about on verse or writing
    :
    : i think that would be "get touched naturally", the very experience i had before i wrote June's Bay. and now i have some feelings to go on sth related to month. next will be july, but not yet figured it out, coz not yet "got touched" , so i prefer let it wait.. :)



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unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-08 23:53:44, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: more about on verse or writing

snack...meals, it seems you are living in LA not in Jiangsu. enjoy.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-08 22:48:39, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: more about on verse or writing
:
:

and ps, a little more again,

  • if you want the readers to enjoy reading your writngs one time, you need first enjoy reading yours ten times without boring, as unvail has mentioned;
  • write to enjoy yourself. when you find writing is tedious or can hardly know what to write or how to write, stop for a while.do not write to write(为写而写).writing should be a relaxing and funny thing, or a way freeing you of passion(were it not relieved, passion can make you uncomfortable);
  • catch the sparkle of inspirations, which flys fast. you shound remember it immediately rather let it slip away. sometime it's slight as a breeze; if stronger, like a electric flow through your body; the strongest, can make you cry;
  • snacks are as good as formal meal. when inspirations are strong (it may be called "passion",right?), just record it, it is a big meal. but when slight, record it and see if it can be extended, or just let it be. it may be nice snack. we need some nice snacks between meals, do we? This is why some masters sometimes write small works;
  • continued by other potential writers... thanks :)

    【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
    : 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
    : 日期:2007-07-08 21:55:08, 来源:未名交友
    : 标题:Re: more about on verse or writing
    :
    : i think that would be "get touched naturally", the very experience i had before i wrote June's Bay. and now i have some feelings to go on sth related to month. next will be july, but not yet figured it out, coz not yet "got touched" , so i prefer let it wait.. :)



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