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分类:文学创作  创建于:2008-02-27 被查看:10625次 [收藏:日记|作者] [评论]
() Favorite songs, music, verses...||醉是音乐”俱乐部 || [总目录] 00, 01, 02, 03, 04, 05
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络, 远的, 春天 

春啊,天天, 计划,   排好
麦苗,   天天, 长大长高 
小草,  听号,  集合,   田山腰
柳枝,  舒展,  花苞
明天,  柳絮,  舞蹈 

春啊,着身旁奔跑
害得,   我这般,   
却不,   能,  草儿、柳枝,
,  给时(间), 一个, 回报 

她啊,怎会,  知道,  知道,  
我的,  梦啊,  不在,   她怀 (抱)
夜啊漫,  ,   是 我
思念之门,   秘 

天涯,海角,因真挚
我们同在一片月下
牵着你手贴近我心
温暖,是季节永恒

谁说怀抱,  只是,   虚无
眼角,  晶嘴边微笑
那是,  春天张扬,   骄傲
无法,  解谜底俊俏

络, 远的, 春天




reference:

 远的春天  -心事托芝



※ 来源: http://www.JiaoYou8.com ※
 
unavail
45岁,加州
评论于:2008-03-02 13:35:19  [评论]

Lotosriver: thanks. you too. cheers and enjoy.

 
Lotosriver
38岁,广东
评论于:2008-02-27 09:11:07  [评论]
一切安好,嘿嘿.
 
unavail
45岁,加州
评论于:2008-02-27 06:48:13  [评论]

1. what i like this short verse is its freshness, as well as each short phrase is a beautiful, unlimited image.

2. as i said, can't understand why J8 is full of such nice and beautiful stuffs that is not easily found. may J8 and you all be most blessed. thanks and enjoy. and with my/our best wishes.

3. 祝大家幸福快乐每一天!

 
unavail
45岁,加州
评论于:2008-02-27 06:41:22  [评论]

诗者,歌
; 歌者,诗.

诗,不成歌. 歌, .



 
unavail
45岁,加州
评论于:2008-02-27 06:40:52  [评论]

...btw: try to check somewhere else, it seems it is so difficult to finish a single reading every time, though i strongly believe there are a lot of talented people over there, but just no way to let myself stay.  not sure why this place is full of unlimited amusement. cheers and enjoy.


 
unavail
45岁,加州
评论于:2008-02-27 06:40:31  [评论]

... forget to let you all know i am kind of short of time recently and i won't be able to do intensive checking and reply on this website. need to say J8 is an amazing place for web surfing and making friends. so, my heart will be always with you all and will try to participate as much as i can. again, thank you all. best regards, best bless, cheers, and enjoy. 


 
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