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分类:文学创作 创建于:2008-04-25 被查看:5703次来源: 未名交友 [回复]

四月

 

打开窗门

迎四月的晨曦

微风中有百花的味道

和湿润的清新

 

到原野上

看燕子飞来飞去

风筝也唱着鸽哨

快乐写在 地上孩子们的脸

 

取一些吗呐

和上泥土

就能让采来的四月

活泼 新鲜

 

枯燥的日子不再枯燥

寂寞里有四月相伴


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unavail回复于:2008-04-27 17:06:24 [回复]
my pleasure. cheers and enjoy. have a nice weekend.
xdjdmc回复于:2008-04-26 05:51:52 [回复]
thanks you so much, my friend. but without you or other friends here, how can i write what you call famous.:) thank you again, and relax and enjoy this wonder season. best bless! 
unavail回复于:2008-04-25 23:44:17 [回复]
unavail回复于:2008-04-25 23:42:46 [回复]
nice picture as well.

unavail回复于:2008-04-25 23:42:18 [回复]


Note: 1. hey friend, you have great talent. be honest, who cares about famous people writing what. this is un-famous people writing famous. 2. very, very fresh. hao yi jing.


四月

 

打开窗门   // nice

迎四月的晨曦   // nice

微风中有百花的味道  // so nice

和湿润的清新        // SO nice

 

到原野上  // nice

看燕子飞来飞去 // nice

风筝也唱着鸽哨  // very nice

快乐写在 地上孩子们的脸  // very nice

 

取一些吗呐  // nice

和上泥土  // VEry nice

就能让采来的四月 // VERY nice

活泼 新鲜  // nice

 

枯燥的日子不再枯燥  // nice

寂寞里有四月相伴   // very nice

unavail回复于:2008-04-25 23:35:15 [回复]
very, very nice.

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